I was out on a boardwalk in the Joyce Wildlife Management Area on the edge of the Manchac Swamp, watching the daylight slowly unfold. In front of me, a massive cypress tree framed the left side of my composition with the open freshwater marsh opening out behind it. In the distance a mist could be seen rising up in front of a murky line of trees in the distance.
The image was ok, but just ok. I was limited by the water around me, and the view afforded by the boardwalk: I couldn’t move 20 yards to the left or right to change the available perspective. But I knew something was missing.
Many times a composition can be improved by a change of lens perspective or a change in your elevation: would this look more interesting from down low, for instance. But in this case I was stuck. But I knew the shot needed another element to work.
Then I saw it. A lone duck, just a silhouette off in the distance, seemed to be barreling straight at me. At the last minute it turned, heading off down one of the other invisible overhead pathways that only the ducks knew about. A few minutes later, another one did the same thing.
So now I was ready. Thinking about the duck and my shutter speed, I made an adjustment to my exposure, wanting to get a bit of blur in those duck wings. Now it was time to wait.
The mosquitoes were bad, warming up as the day started to break. I had forgotten repellant, of course. I started to wonder if any more ducks would come.
Then there they were! Two of them, flying together on the same path. I got off a few shots before they were gone. Over the next 10 minutes, this same thing happened a couple more times.
The image, with the addition of the duck silhouettes, is greatly improved, I think. The highlights on the water at the lower right also help, adding a bit of depth to what would otherwise be a very flat foreground.
The key, of course, was searching for that missing element.
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